DescriptionThe paper is an Information Synthesis for my English Composition 1013 class. It cannot be argumentative or pick sides. The quality of the resources will influence the grade.Quotes are to be used sparingly.
Outline is needed.!
my professor prefers the sources to be from databases.
She basically just wants a straight-forward essay where the thesis is in chronological order with the body. She doesn’t want any emotion or for it to be persuasive. She doesn’t like it too wordy either. The intro needs a hook and the conclusion needs to refer back to the hook.
also there shouldn’t be any questions in the introduction unless it is immediately answered.
the essay is not abut young people. it is just about people. and you cant take sides, but you should list the things that pressure people to marry and then explain them in your own words not someone else’s. and then back up what you’re saying with a source.
The thesis should list the things that pressure people to marry. Each body paragraph should then explain the things you mentioned in your own words.
Also, talk about contemporary culture such as art or music or politics or religion, then expand on them. You should only pick 3-4 things for your thesis to talk about. The thesis should be at the end of the first paragraphs. Keep the quotes/citations to only 1 per paragraph.
it needs to list why people get married under the wrong circumstances due to contemporary culture. this is why i said you could use religion or music and explain why those things almost hypnotize people into marrying when they aren’t yet ready.
when you explain these things (for example religion) use your own words to desribe how this affects people and then only 1 source to back up what youre saying. but please make sure you only use a maximum of 8 citations for the entire paper.
it needs to be about how contemporary culture INFLUENCES people to GET MARRIED when they AREN NOT READY. It should not be argumentative or pick sides or show emotion. It should list why people get married under the wrong circumstances due to contemporary culture. for example, music portays this highly sexualized and everlasting type of love that can influence people to marry when they are not even in love. It should have 3-5 topic points that are addressed in the thesis. The introduction should have a hook that is framed in the conclusion as well. Quotes should be used sparingly or only for maximum impact on the paragraph.
keep in mind the essay is about CONTEMPORARY culture and the way it influences marriage
