long term psychological and emotional effects of war on children caused by displacement, family disruption and child exploitation . please see essay 3 short research argument word file. Thesis requirement by my prof to be consisted of 3 components ( refute or/and concede point made by counterargument + my stance+ why/because / reason why i’m taking my stance) .. i’m finding difficulties in crystalizing my thesis and my topic sentences + organization) the sentences in my essay that highlighted with yellow need to be paraphrased. my thesis statement is underlined. i want my essay to be a powerful one. However, my essay is not yet complete.. i submitted the introduction+ thesis + (1st and 2nd paragraphs of refute and concede points) + paragraph to reassert my points and remind the reader what i will be talking about+ last paragraph is about children psychological and emotional impact of displacement on children.
please if my ideas needed to be support you can some ideas and let me know if an extra sources are needed. i will be working on the other paragraphs to send them later to you.
