these sentences to state their meaning in fewer words. Avoid passive voice, needless repetition, and wordy phrases and clauses.
1-The bicycle was damaged, and it was hard to repair.
2-Although Bradley Hall is regularly populated by students, close study of the building as a structure is seldom undertaken by them.
3-When she started college, she had high hopes her specific educational needs would be met by her chosen discipline’s faculty.
4-It is expected that the new schedule will be announced by the bus company within the next few days.
5-Trouble is caused when people disobey rules that have been established for the safety of all.
6-A campus rally was attended by more than a thousand students. Five students were arrested by campus police for disorderly conduct, while several others are charged by campus administrators with organizing a public meeting without being issued a permit to do so.
7-The house’s bricks were painted over with gray and terra cotta.
8-The subjects that are considered most important by students are those that have been shown to be useful to them after graduation.
9-In the not too distant future, college freshmen must all become aware of the fact that there is a need for them to make contact with an academic adviser concerning the matter of a major.
10-Love is a relative term and can only be correctly defined by the one professing it.
