Essay by discussing and contextualizing the topic/English
Essay Considerations
Introduction
1) If the student’s introduction is short, can the student introduce the topic mater of the essay by discussing and contextualizing the topic addressed by the student? (Optional)
2) Does the student introduce the author’s name, publication, text, date, and venue for each text they plan to analyze?
3) Did the student briefly mention the author’s project and argument in the introduction? When you think about the project, think about some of the primary methods of action that an author takes to assemble an argument: interviews, researches, provides testimony, relies on experience, and relays information, inform, move, persuade. You focus on certain elements based upon your discussion.
4) Does the student include a project statement about what they intend to do? Does the introduction effectively lead up to this project statement in some way?
Example: Pink creates a very persuasive argument that has been viewed by millions, but the question is, how and why is his argument so persuasive? In this essay, I will analyze how Pink’s text is so effective for his overall purpose and intended audience.
5) Does the student mention the primary strategies they analyze in their thesis to explain how the authors use certain strategies based upon context?
Example: Pink incorporates precedent from authorities to prove that intrinsic motivation encourages productivity, uses humor to set a framework for the evidence that follows, and creates a cause and effect framework to provide a solution for businesses, but Jennifer Kahn uses narration to engage a general audience, description based upon personal accounts, and authorities to appeal to academics. Both texts use strategies that are effective for their context, but those strategies differ based upon the author’s purposes.
Do the body paragraphs accomplish the following goals?
Rhetorical Analysis Body Paragraph Outline X 3
1) Does the topic sentence highlight the strategy under analysis?
2) Does the student contextualize the strategy within the overall argument, claim, or section? What does the strategy help the author to achieve? Does it function as an organizational structure for claims? Does it function as evidence? Does it allow the author to provide an aside and engage the audience? Does it encourage the audience to consider something contrary to social commonplaces?
3) Does the student provide an example or paraphrase the strategy? Does the student draw critical information from the strategy to help illustrate how it is used?
4) Does the student explain how the strategy advances a particular part of the argument, and is detail included in this discussion? This is part summary, part discussion about how a strategy functions to promote a part of the argument. In your analysis, include evidence/facts/points that are relevant for your discussion. If you explain how an author uses a particular strategy or move to address and challenge a common perspective, then you need to pull facts and details from context to explain how society understands a particular topic, and then discuss how the author works to alter or address that common perspective.
5) The analysis should be based upon the type of appeal that the strategy makes, and before each section of analysis, the student should mention what kind of appeal they are focusing on (ethos, pathos, logos) as if to create mini topic sentences within the paragraph. Remember, the best strategies make all three appeals. If the strategy encourages the audience to feel for someone, that is a pathos appeal, and if that same strategy supports a claim, then it also functions as a logos appeal.
Conclusion
1) Does the student bring all the ideas together and paraphrase how the strategies were selected based upon context? Does the student briefly recap each strategy and talk about how it supports the argument/a part of the argument. Are they discussed in the same order found in the body paragraphs?
2) Does the student leave the audience with something to think about or a way to apply these or similar strategies in other assignments, writing approaches, speeches, or everyday life? What is the significance of your analysis? What can you conclude about the writing process and conveying information to others based upon your analysis? The student can also mention how all acts of conversation or somewhat rhetorical, so they can explain how approaches similar to those described and analyzed could be used in everyday life.
3) The conclusion can be longer than one paragraph, and concluding paragraphs read well when the author includes their own viewpoint, responds with significance about their discussion, or relates the argument to something their audience can identify with.
Other considerations
Grammar and Punctuation
1) Does the student provide a clear subject or pronoun and active verb for every sentence?
2) Is the right subject doing the right action?
3) Is every sentence clear?
4) Does the student make proper use of commas, including separating intro clauses from main clauses; separating a digressions, asides, or parenthetical phrases (additional information) from the rest of the sentence with a comma before and comma after?
5) Does the student include proper subject/verb agreement?
6) Does the student use proper attributions, meaning does the student describe how the author does something? Remember, verbs for attributions can be found in your quoting guide and in your PPACES text.
7) Does the student include enough detail so that everything is contextualized, meaning you have no questions about how an author does something because the student’s paraphrase is so detailed.
8) Does the student include a full sentence before and after semicolons (;)?
9) Does the student include a full sentence before colons (:)?