Comment:
1) Make sure that the thesis of your essay is specific and argumentative. How did citizen journalism counter government attempts? It’s accepted and understood that social media played a significant role in the Arab Spring, so make sure that the essay’s thesis is unique.
2) Be sure to read over each sentence and correct any run-on sentences or sentence fragments.
3) Expand upon the conclusion drawing out the implications of your essay’s argument. What role do you see social media playing in future revolutions? Are there other up and coming technologies that you think will have an impact on the way people interact/protest their government?
4))Please give an interesting beginning in the essay.
5)You should a clearly thesis statement on the essay.
6)At the end of each paragraph, you should have your own opinions and analysis.
7)You should rewite the content at least 50%,not just rewrite the thesis statement and the conclusion.
