1.I have highlighted in red sentences that need to be reworded in a more concise way. But there will probably be more.2. Please proofread and clarify ideas where needed and improve style where needed. Please check for formatting, grammar, spelling, punctuation. Improve flow and clarity, adjust awkward phrasing, redundancy. Must keep with APA format. Walden university formatting.
3. “Purpose of Study” needs to be reorganized per mentors suggestion.
4. Please help rewrite the research questions for more clarity utilizing mentors suggestions on the side.
5. Please make all changes highlighted in yellow.
