Lord of the flies; Analysis

Question details:
Well, i need to go through and shorten my qoutes, so i suppose that would be my largest item since they take up far to much space.
My secondary main concern is going into the proper amount of explanantion for the quotes. Some quotes i feel as though I didnt explain hardly at all, and others I overly, and unnecesarily explained them.
Oh, and i dont have any money to pay :/ i dont have any sort of debit or credit card.

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