Choose one of your essay posts to revise and polish. Using everything you have learned to date, including my comments on student posts and your textbook, make this essay an example of your best writing. Make sure that your revised essay is sufficiently different from your draft. Even if you liked your draft, you are required to make significant changes to your polished essay. The process of revision is a specific mental activity, so you may not simply submit a draft essay, even if you think it is good enough.
The purpose of the polished essay is to demonstrate that you can produce a written analysis or argument which is balanced, thoughtful, and well-written. I have asked you to write four very different kinds of essays in this unit. Whichever essay you choose to perfect should demonstrate the qualities of its particular form. Make sure that your revised essay is sufficiently different from your draft. Even if you liked your draft, you are required to make significant changes to your polished essay. The process of revision is a specific mental activity, so you may not simply submit a draft essay, even if you think it is good enough.
choice 1 of the 3 essay to revise and polish, follow the rule above. can use a little bit profesional word and academie writing skill, revise from grammar, word choice, mechanice, main idea, thesis, organization and make a thesis sentence(stetament) on the end of first paragraph.
