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This is a long-lived reality that she only had to actually live through her dreams. This is truly about what she once was and what was woven along with the blood vessels of both her soft heart and tangled brain! She once, deeply wanted, and still profoundly wants, to be able to get back to what she doesn’t even know, that was the shelter of her floating soul! might she be a white dwarf? or might she be a black hole? who knows? when she, herself doesn’t know! An astronaut, was the first answer when they asked her as a kid, what do you want to be in the future. Her first thought of herself, her first vivid vision of belonging, of who she was and who she is, was to return home, not the home of humans on earth but the one for human on stars!! This was what she first thought of, what she first knew she wanted! And who doesn’t know that firsts are always the most real! are always the more sensible and sincere! Sadly, she forever as she grew up went all out just to realize that it wasn’t possible for her to be, what she forever was an will be, a child conceived by the outer space! Though she knew she doesn’t belong to here and now, she just couldn’t fight back! She weakened! She curved down and just surrendered when it was clear for her that the current world she is exhibiting is just as mysterious, enigmatic, and very angry as her birth father was! Simply, she was not a coward to fight back and against this world when it was the most gigantic, frightening, and already swallowing world but it was the enraged universe shattered enough to stab her into the womb of her mother, just so when she is born, would grow and realize she doesn’t belong to where she was born, yet, she just cannot fight to return after she was expelled!”

can you fix this poem above? proofreading and editing the word choice.. Thank you

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