This class in Antitrust class.
For this paper which is Price Discrimination comparing the price discrimination between the US ans
SA, from the legal system, benefits, and public economic prespective. I want you to edit it for me.
First, it has a lot of copy and paste (Plagiarism), but it has a lot of good information. So, I want you
to paraphrase each sentences and paragraph by using the same information also I want you to
include each citation for each information you use(intext citation). I will attach the references page
to go back and forth between the reference page and the paragraph.
1 The intro needs to be expanded and provide more information and remove the examples in
separate section.
2 For the first 8 page, try to summary them and use different source (so no need to use all the
examples from page 18)
3The legal stuff in my paper needs to move in front instated of the end of the paper.
4 the into should lay out the issue.
5What is the relevant statue said?
6 Economic brought some beneficial, and unbenifical areas, what is it?
7lye out the Law in Saudi Arabia comparing with the US
8Include some of real case or unrealistic case for both (US and SA)
9Interpret the law in Economic efficiency.
10 The law in Saudi Arabia inefficiency.
11 Identify the problem from Econ perspective.
12 In page 15, Take out the history part and put the stage then move to Saudi Arabia.
13 Page 16 cite the statue of SA.
14 P.20. Make it more clear. Include your opinion if it is in your own words,
specially the last paragraph.
15p. 23, second paragraph not clear. Explain more, why did you say that. if it is legal in SA or not.
16 p.24, change the subheading name and move it in front under the legal area
17 p.28 About the Public Perspective, the professor side cite this part and some idea are not related.
18 p.30 Delete the whole part about the Elasticity of demand fro SA (the econ part)
Find other example and source Ex.(Case law, Econ lecture).
Work on case where is the problem or not?
