Psych
I have my research paper written it needs to be touched up so you can tell
1. You need to better develop what you are looking for. What behaviors were you watching for? Your observations do not seem very systematic, so we need to
narrow them down based on your topic.
2. What is your research question? Dependent variable? Independent variable?
3. What previous research has been done on the topic? Your topic is very unclear from your paper.
