Revise/rewrite the ten sentences/ English
Revise/Rewrite the ten sentences below. In short, make the sentences better-determine what needs to go (gender-specific language, wordiness, clichés, and so on); then, edit accordingly.
1. Frank Thomas and Mrs. White will arrive on Thursday for the meeting
2. My Chinese assistant speaks more articulately than I do.
3. It is tricky to try and understand all of mankind.
4. The company needs more manpower, so two positions are available: salesman and lineman.
5. Each unit is on sale for the sum of $20.00.
6. Prior to the start of the meeting, each department coordinator should read his handbook.
7. Please return back handbooks issued yesterday due to the fact that it contains errors.
8. The actual truth of the matter is that if you want to be a good negotiator, you must know the fundamentals of the contract.
9. There are four stewardesses on this plane at this point in time
10. Papers that are turned in after April 5, 2003 will not receive full credit.
