Write essay on al-hazem storm
1. In first paragraph I wrote the event, but I need an introduction paragraph then the next paragraph the event paragrah. ( make two separet paragraph)
2. I need a conclusion from my essay. ( it should be conceted with previous paragraph)
3. I need a theise stamtmet in each paragraph.
4 I need to change the topic sentence or make it more clear of first cause of the essay. ( that on paragraph 2)
5. check the transition word. ( make it better)
6. chech the realted of inforamtion and make good connection between each paragraph.
7. check if i have any mistake.
My organsim of my essay should be like that
1. ( introduction)
2. ( event)
3. (Causes)
4. (Conclusion.)
