Write a review of a draft food medias influence on diet
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1. Food Media’s Influence on Diet.
2. Italian Cuisine in America perspective.
3. What is the proper formula of Nutrition, Hydration and Supplements an athlete should consume to properly fuel their body leading up to a sporting event?
